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Please help... im a international student. Hewlett-Packard Company is known as world’s largest maker of personal computers and also one of the world's largest information technology companies operates in nearly every country. William R. Hewlett and David Packard found this company in 1939. HP’s Major product lines include personal computing devices, enterprise servers, related storage devices, as well as a diverse range of printers and other imaging products. They are targeting in variety of fields; households, small to medium sized businesses and as well as online distribution, consumer-electronics and office-supply retailers, software partners and major technology vendors. As a world’s largest information technology company, there are still few problems that company is facing. Few of the problems that HP is facing are drop in sales, decline in imaging and printing group avenue, and decline in software revenue. One of the major problem that HP is facing is that drop in sales. HP saw its sales dropped 19 percent to $8.19 billion: PCs, Printers, Servers, and Software. There are some possible reasons why the sale has declined due to possible economic crisis, quality of products, trend of new technologies, and other competitors in the market. By looking at an evidence of constant drops of HP’s sales, there are some possibilities that HP’s sales wouldn’t improve in anytime soon. At this point, serious action must be taken to solve this problem. There are many ways to solve the issues starting from switching the locations/territories, and plan a better advertisement/marketing strategy. But my recommendation to this solution is to improve products and sales by managing the relationship between development and sales team, and catch up with the new trend of the technologies and hit the market with the new product that has same benefit, much more convenient, and more affective compared to PC products. To support my thought of recommendation, besides looking at the formal graph of statistics, we can easily find the mobile phone that has same function as computer. According to Forrester Researcher Report, they have researched and has clearly announced with their back up evidence that PC sales will continue to decline, much as they have for the past several years. Just by planning or making a first step into this industry will have a huge impact of HP’s future.
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- The Hewlett-Packard Company is known as the world’s largest maker of personal computers and is also one of the world's largest information technology companies, which operates in nearly every country. William R. Hewlett and David Packard founded this company in 1939. HP’s major product lines include personal computing devices, enterprise servers, and related storage devices, as well as a diverse range of printers and other imaging products. They target a variety of fields, such as household devices, small to medium sized businesses, online distribution, consumer electronics, office-supply retailers, software partners, and major technology vendors. Even as one of the world’s largest information technology companies, they still face problems. They have had a decline in imaging and printing group avenues, and a decline in software revenue. Their major problems is their drop in sales. HP recently saw its sales of PCs, printers, servers, and software drop 19 percent, to $8.19 billion. Possible reasons why sales have declined include potential economic crisis, the quality of their products, the trend of new technologies, and other competitors in the market. The evidence of constant drops in HP’s sales suggests the possibility that HP’s sales won’t improve anytime soon. At this point, serious action must be taken to solve this problem. There are many ways to solve the issues, starting from switching their locations and territories, and planning a better advertisement and marketing strategy. But my recommendation for this problem is to improve products and sales by managing the relationship between development and sales teams, catching up with the new technological trends, and hitting the market with new products that have the same benefits as current PC products, but are much more convenient and effective. To support my recommendations, besides looking at the formal graph of statistics, we can easily find that the mobile phone now provides many of the same functions as a PC. Forrester Researcher Report has researched the issue and has announced that they believe PC sales will continue to decline, much as they have for the past several years, and they have supported this with substantial evidence. Making a first step into this industry will have a huge impact on HP’s future.
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